I've shown you the beginning...

Of chapter one, and now I'll show you the very last paragraph. I'm thinking I should end it a little stronger? But at the moment I have no idea how to do that. Copyright of ME, so don't even think about it...Let me know what you think!

"I could hear muffled sounds of my mother crying and my brother shouting, the dogs barking, the voices of the soldiers. All of it mixed together, each sound becoming indistinguishable from the other. I choked on the thick air, dense with unbearable suffering. That was the first time I wished for death to find me."

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